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Post by Silky on May 27, 2009 12:21:51 GMT -5
[bg=black][cs=7] kitxx Berry the apprehensive wherexx on top of the tires whenxx just as the sun is setting on a newleaf day notesxx second love confession in one day le gasp :o music;; love story - taylor swift
Berry's pretty white pelt sat a-top the deep-set black tires, her red eyes flashing in the sun set. Berry looked around the Fireclan camp. Most fighters were asleep now, under the plank. Berry couldn't go to sleep yet. She had arranged to meet Dolphinfeet here, now.
Oh how madly in love she was with that handsome, strong, tall tom. He was tall, dark and handsome, everything a she-cat would want. He was mysterious and fun-loving, and Berry just loved him.
Berry balanced her rather thin body on the tires, looking around with a smile on her face. Dolphinfeet wasn't here yet, but she would wait forever for him; she did love him, after all.
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Post by Twilight on May 27, 2009 13:46:00 GMT -5
[atrb=border,0,true][cs=7][bg=212774] A blue-gray FireClan tom, fairly lithe for all he was worth, walked into view of the tires. A-top the tires was the she-cat he loved the most, and the she-cat he had protected from many toms and their needs. His hard, dark blue eyes softened as he saw the she-cat. He stepped forward, every hair on his pelt standing on end. If Redeyes and Crueleye learned of their love, they would most likely kill him, and take to using Berry as part of their harem. If that were to pass, he would fight as hard as he could, just to help the she-cat he loved. He ended up besides the tires, and jumped on their rubber with a small thud. "Berry." his gruff voice called out to her, wanting to talk to her. His voice, though gruff and tough, was soft for the she-cat.
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Post by Silky on May 28, 2009 8:27:26 GMT -5
[bg=black][cs=7] kitxx Berry the apprehensive wherexx on top of the tires whenxx just as the sun is setting on a newleaf day notesxx second love confession in one day le gasp :o music;; love story - taylor swift
Berry's berry like eyes looked down at Dolphinfeet, sparkling with joy. "Dolphinfeet~!" Berry smiled, jumping down beside him and nuzzling him. Hello~!" She giggled, smiling up at the lanky tom.
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Post by Twilight on May 28, 2009 9:30:28 GMT -5
[atrb=border,0,true][cs=7][bg=212774] Kitll Dolphinfeet the Happy... Notesll He loves u!!! Musicll Farewell, violin music. XD
Dolphinfeet's blue-gray fur warmed at Berry's touch. He leaned forward and licked her ear, and rested his nose on her forehead. "Berry..." He moved to sit besides her and gent;y rubbed her back with his tail. "Berry..." His blue eyes, so contrasting to Berry's, were shining as he looked into the she-cat's face. Dolphinfeet reached out anf licked her cheek. "There was something you wnated to talk t me about?"
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Post by Shadewing on May 28, 2009 15:11:42 GMT -5
[[Your posts MUST be 200 words. None of these posts are even 150. PLEASE use the word count.]]
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Post by Silky on May 29, 2009 5:54:37 GMT -5
[bg=black][cs=7] kitxx Berry the knowing wherexx on top of the tires whenxx just as the sun is setting on a newleaf day notesxx i'll try shadey :b Also the word count doesn't work :x musicxx love story - taylor swift
Berry purred gently as Dolphinfeet stroked her back with his tail, She nuzzled his chin gently, and giggled when he licked her cheek softly. "Well, I've been thinking... Redeyes wants more kits in the clan, right?" Berry looked up at Dolphinfeet.
"I... I want to have kits, but not Redeyes or Crueleye's." Berry said, wrapping her tail around Dolphinfeets. She nuzzled his chin again. "I... I want your kits Dolphinfeet." She purred, looking up at him gently. "And I don't care if Crueleye sees me pregnant, or Redeyes. I'll say they'll get what they wanted."
Berry laughed gently as she nuzzled Dolphinfeet again, her feet moving up and down a little, her pretty red eyes staring out into the sunset unblinkingly.
[153 word count]
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Post by Twilight on May 29, 2009 7:28:48 GMT -5
[atrb=border,0,true][cs=7][bg=212774] Kitll Dolphinfeet the Happy... Notesll He loves u!!! Musicll Um... nothing at the moment. XD Notesll Sorry Shadey. I know I'm breaking that rules, BUT at the time word count did not work, and I had writers block yesterday. XD
Dolphinfeet was silent and contemplative after Berry's confession, and he stayed that way until he sun had sank. He turned his eyes back to the she-cat, thinking. "A re you sure about this Berry?" he asked, his voice low, hardly audible. He stared back at the dying light, wondering. He wasn't about to let a young she-cat lose her virtue over some wild fantasy she may regret later. He was making sure she was 100 percent sure of her decision before he let in and mated with her. Because of this sudden confession and terms, he was thinking back. He was thinking back to a she-cat, huddled and cared against some bushes.
"Stop! Don't come near me!" the she-cat hissed. Then, a tom appeared, all dark, his identity disowned. "Why ever would I do that? You've always said you've someday wanted kits, and now's your chance, your chance to have them in the easiest way possible, with your dear old brother!" The tom flicked his hail, and was creeping towards the she-cat. She tried to run, but the tom caught her, mounted her, and she was raped, leaing rise to three kits birth, and the death of their mother.
He had imagined the rape of his mother many times, but his one seemed to be the most likely. Then, he looked at Berry through halfway haunted eyes, and he spoke. "If you want kits, my kits, you can have them, but, before we mate, let's go someplace where none f the FireClan can see us, so no one will be naughty and tell." He played a smile onto his face at his joke.
(OH! I finished reading Sunrise last night! ^_^
*SPOILERS* Leafpool and Crowfeather were their parents, Ashfur was killed by Hollyleaf, which in turn she kiled herself, and Leafpool left the clan, and Bambleclaw doesn't seem to be mates with Squirrelflight anymore! My CrowXLeaf theory was correct, but I never thought Hollyleaf would have killed Ashfur. X.X)
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Post by Silky on May 29, 2009 9:23:10 GMT -5
[bg=black][cs=7] ``kit;; Berry the definate ``notes;; =P Dolphinfeet is the half brother of Crueleye, therefore his mothe was a cruel she-cat who mated with GOD knows how many males... So it was more the males got raped But that can be his half sister raped by his other half brother ^^; ooh, I re-read it. Dolphinfeet isn't one of Hordear's litter, Shiningeyes was, and she's dead =P ``words;; 149 D:<
Berry looked at Dolphinfeet's expression. The sun retreated beyond the horizon, and now it was dark, but still warm and humid. He stared out over the horizon, watching the dying light.
Berry looked down at her feet. She had never told him she had had kits before; they were all dead though, killed by a premature birthing. Berry was so ashamed, but she knew she wanted these kits with the tom she loved, not stupid Crueleye or Redeyes. They were so full of themselves, stupid toms.
Then, he spoke. He was going to take her to a place none of the other cats would know about, and Berry's red eyes lit up, sparkling with joy. She let out a squeak, nuzzling Dolphinfeet under his chin again.
"Thank you Dolphinfeet." Berry smiled, untwining her tail from his, and leaping off the tires. "You coming then, tigeR?" She grinned, giving him a flirty look.
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Post by Twilight on May 29, 2009 10:02:31 GMT -5
[atrb=border,0,true][cs=7][bg=212774] Kitll Dolphinfeet the Happy... Notesll He loves u!!! Musicll Um... nothing at the moment. XD Notesll Sorry Shadey. I know I'm breaking that rules, BUT at the time word count did not work, and I had writers block yesterday. XD
Dolphinfeet looked back at his new mate, and nodded. "Alright, you can have my kits. Let's go behind the tires. No other cat is here right now, and I really don't want to trek you far away. " He gave her a smile to melt her world, and his blue-grey pelt blurred as he crouched and sprung behind the tires. "You're tiger is ready!" he called up to her as a smile played on his lips in his new-found bliss. I'll be a father... How wonderful... And the mother will be Berry! This is a sight to behold... He sat on his haunches, curling and uncurling his tail, flicking his ears back and forth. Hmm... He heard scuffling in the grass beside him. He looked down slowly and a brown mouse was scuffling in some taller grass. His dark eyes locked onto his target, and he pounced, the mouse givin a little squek before it died. He put the mouse between his front feet and meowed up to his mate. "For you, my love!"
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Post by Silky on May 29, 2009 11:29:11 GMT -5
[bg=black][cs=7] ``kit;; Berry the definate ``notes;; YAY BABIES =D ``words;; 158, what is up with this muse? D:<
Berry smiled as she watched the strong figure of Dolphinfeet leap down, and then catch a mouse. As he dropped in by her feet, she purred. "Thank you..." She smiled, picking it up and biting it in half, pushing the other half towards Dolphinfeet. "I can't sit here with my love and not share any food with him, can I?" She purred, curling up her tail, and lying on the floor.
Her pinky red eyes looked up at her new mate; if Redeyes were to find out, he'd flip, but Crueleye? Not so much, Crueleye was Dolphinfeet's brother though, he wouldn't mind. It was Crueleye who was the one having all the she-cats to himself, especially poor Dust and Dusky.
Berry lifted up her tail with a giggle, and turned her head to Dolphinfeet. "Come at me with your love Dolphinfeet!" She merowed, her red eyes looking up at him flirtaiously, waiting for him to take the chance with her.
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Post by Twilight on May 29, 2009 12:37:18 GMT -5
Dolphinfeet quickly ate up his half, and then she said to go ahead. At that point, he went ahead. He slid beside her, brushing along her side, and turning around when he reached her back. He slowly got on top of erh back, and gripped her neck lightly in his jaws. He then started to mate with her. His blue-grey pelt turned blacker and blacker as the light dyed away while they mated. Berry's pelt turned a dakr cream. It was almost moonhigh when he stopped and dismounted. He was breathing heavier than usual, and he went straight to her face and nuzzled her. "Are you alright, Berry dear?"
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Post by Silky on May 29, 2009 13:40:31 GMT -5
[bg=black][cs=7] ``kit;; Berry the tired ``notes;; YAY BABIES =D ``words;; 564
Berry felt so much pleasure when Dolphinfeet had mated with her, but it had tired her, and she nuzzled Dolphinfeet's face back gently. It was no so dark she could barely see her love. It had been a wonderful mating ritual.
"I'm fine Dolphinfeet... If you didn't sound so tired, I'd ask you to go again..." The she-cat giggled, cuddling up to him gently, sharing her warmth with him. "It was so wonderful Dolphinfeet..." She purred, licking him gently.
Should she tell him about her earlier kits, or should she just hide it? She sighed slightly, before turning to him, her pelt looking grey in the light. "Dolphinfeet, I have something to tell you..." She said nervously, looking into his dark eyes.
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