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Post by Shadewing on Aug 6, 2009 20:09:46 GMT -5
NOTENOTENOTENOTE!!! VERY VERY IMPORTANT!!! DON'TDON'TDON'T GIVE ME A CAT WHO DOESN'T HAVE A FORM ON SOTC, OR A DESCRIPTION! I AM GETTING SICK OF LOOKING THROUGH EVERY CLAN FOR A CATS INFO, AND NOT FINDING IT BECAUSE IT SIMPLY ISN'T THERE![at least import the old one from SOTCv1 and put it in pending or something!] less important note: Fur/Pelt is a very blah ending, and I'm seeing that WAAAY too much. Please, next time you name/create a warrior, remember that the suffix isn't on there just for fun.
I'm not sure if this will get more than two replies, but it was worth a shot.
So, I will rate your warrior names [warriors/meddies only, please =)] for free or your money back. I'll rate them without percents, but rather I'll fill in my thoughts with the following fields:
Sensibility: Does it make sense? Would the warrior cats have a slightest clue as to what something is. ex- Computervirus won't get very good points. Image: Can I kind of imagine [briefly] what the cat will look like? Warrior-ness: Would the warrior cats accept it? [aka no moons, suns, etc] Smoothness: Does to sound like an ocean wave or a thousand rocks being thrown at my tongue? How much it fits the cat: Is Yellowstripe a black cat?
I may add more later, but those are the basics.
So.. just throw your names at me--
oh, and before I end, I just want to give an example.
Badgersong, a cat of mine.
Sensibility: The only thing that could go wrong with this is some people thinking badgers don't have a song-- they indeed do, as song can mean a distinct sound, which badgers do have. However, "song" may mean gentle, or maybe loud, the meaning is unclear, but Badgersong is neither of these. Image: I would imagine him to be black and white, hence the badger. Warrior-ness: It is very realistic-- badgers live where the warriors live-- they even encounter them sometimes-- and it's just describing a trait. Smoothness: Could be my own bias, but I love how Badgersong sounds <3
So, now you have a taste of what I'll say to a cat with a good name. Now let's switch to Badgersong's son-- Bravebadger.
Sensibility: Would be be able to know if Bravebadger would be brave at birth, or even a week after birth? No. Thus, the first part doesn't make much sense at all. Badger is a good suffix. Since a badger is all rar angry and an enemy of cats, it's not cool. Personality x Personality clash. Image: I'd imagine him to look somewhat like a badger, which is somewhat right.. he's white with black stripes, but it's still not really great. Warrior-ness: Same with sensibility. Smoothness: It sounds pretty rickety on my tongue. Really long, and just sounds.. </3
So, post and I'll be happy to rate. Don't go all RARARARARAR on me if I don't give your name 100 percent. Please, I won't rate you again <3
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Post by Twilight on Aug 6, 2009 22:47:35 GMT -5
Teehee! I loved this when you had it on the old site...
Nightfire Flameheart (Currently Flamepaw) Poppyclaw Dreambreaker (Not likely to get a good review, but, meh.)) Tigerfrost (Currently Tigerkit) Silverfur (Currently Silverkit) Seamist Destinycall Blacksnow
Hehe! ^_^ Ilu Shady.
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Post by Silky on Aug 7, 2009 5:00:22 GMT -5
Crowstorm (currently Crowpaw) Morningcloud Gladefeet Hollythorn Hidefeather (currently Hidepaw (Hide comes from the animal hide)) Dustfeather (currently Dustpaw) Mudstripe Berrypool (Currently Berry) Ruffledpelt (currently Ruffledpaw)
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Post by Shadewing on Aug 7, 2009 6:38:57 GMT -5
I forgot to put the five names per person at a time rule up.. I'll rate all of your names, though :>
Nightfire
Sensibility: Night does work, as night is in the warriors world, duh. Fire represents hard work and ambition, which is what Nightstar had as an apprentice, iirc. Image: A black cat, or at least an almost all black cat. Warrior-ness: Yes, it's nothing forbidden, except for questionable "fire". Smoothness: Sounds rather nice, because it's rather short and sweet, while having meaning. How much it fits the cat: "Night" fits the black cat. "Fire" works for the personality.
Flameheart
Sensibility: Flame is a hard prefix. While flame can be based from the color, fire could also mean something terrible, a killer of many, destroyer of habitats. However, this is still fine, as it's clearly describing the personality. "Heart", as said by Erin Hunter, is a last name for the best warriors of the Clan [thus Fireheart, Lionheart]. I cannot fully rate the suffix of this, as I don't know exactly how Flamepaw's personality will be, but if he's a loyal warrior who gives it all, then he is deserving of the suffix. Image: An orange cat, or an orange tabby. Dominately orange. Warrior-ness: Flame, as said, is a little iffy, but Heart could work out. Smoothness: Flameheart isn't beautiful, but it works. How much it fits the cat: Flame, meaning the fire, is fine, though it's not a good kit name. Heart is a good suffix for a warrior that I think he'll be.
Poppyclaw
Sensibility: Poppies are something commonly found in the warriors world, so, that does make sense. Claw is a suffix for somebody corageous, and good at fighting, which I can't gather about Poppyclaw, though she did seem to be tough on her first apprentice, which could be power, another meaning of 'claw'. Image: A reddish cat, due to the color of poppies. It could also be a black cat because of the seeds. Warrior-ness: Yes, poppy and claw are natural starts and ends. Smoothness: It sounds good to me. How much it fits the cat: "Poppy" fits an orange cat. "Claw", however, I'm not sure if that works..?
Dreambreaker
correct.
Sensibility: Cats know what a dream is, but breaker isn't something that they know, as suffixes are usually natural nouns and a few verbs. Image: No idea. Warrior-ness: No, dreams are rather sacred to cats. Breaker still doesn't make sense. Smoothness: Dreambreaker doesn't sound too clunky, but still. How much it fits the cat: n/a
Tigerfrost
Sensibility: Tiger is acceptable, from TigerClan, as it's like naming your child something biblical/mythical, as its kind of honorary and stuff. Frost is also an acceptable prefix, which usually accents something on the body, or it can be used to describe a rather chilling personality. Image: A brown or orange striped cat. Kind of hints at a shade of blue eyes, the suffix. Warrior-ness: Warrior-like, as Tiger is a good prefix, again, from stories. Frost is as well acceptable. Smoothness: Tigerfrost doesn't sound the best, but it sounds pretty good. How much it fits the cat: Well, it wasn't the image I came up with, but it does have a white tiger coloring, so that fits Tigerfrost. I guess 'frost' may also accent his color a little.
Silverfur
Sensibility: Silver is a good name, as cats would understand what silver is. Fur accents the prefix, letting us know this cat has silver fur. Image: A silver, white, or gray cat. Warrior-ness: Acceptable. Smoothness: Silverfur is another pretty good sounding name. How much it fits the cat: She is gray.
Seamist
Sensibility: The sea is called "the sun-drown-place" to cats, so 'sea' is not an acceptable prefix. However, mist is perfectly fine, and likely will show beauty of a cat, or show that the cat is a white/silvery color. Image: A silver, or white cat. Warrior-ness: It's nothing sacred, but, again, cats don't call it the sea. Smoothness: I quite like Seamist, I think it sounds good.
Destinycall
Sensibility: Cats don't really believe in the whole destiny thing, and a kit named Destinykit isn't right, as it doesn't describe the kit at all, like prefixes should. Call is an acceptable suffix, but that doesn't mean it makes sense. Image: Unclear. Warrior-ness: "destiny" isn't acceptable, as said. Smoothness: Destinycall is a little long, but it's not that bad. How much it fits the cat: She's a gray tabby, which I didn't expect, mainly because it isn't explained.
Blacksnow
Sensibility: This is not going to be the same as the rest, but oh well. I'll do the best I can.
"Current" could have been acceptable, as it was a special name, for a cat found in a current, and it was per another cat's request.
when she was renamed Blacksnow, it somewhat describes her. Black is her fur color, but snow doesn't do much for her. It may be to describe the white on her, but usually the suffix is there to show off the personality. So, this makes Blacksnow come across as a mean cat. Image: A black cat. Warrior-ness: Acceptable. Smoothness: Blacksnow doesn't sound perfect, but I think it's kinda good. How much it fits the cat: I have the black part right. The personality is wrong, however.
Crowstorm Sensibility: "Crow" is a good prefix, describing the cat, what the prefix idea was made for. "Storm" means that they're fierce and powerful, acceptable. Image: A black or mainly black cat. Short or long fur. Maybe a few scars, due to his ferocity. Warrior-ness: Acceptable!! Smoothness: It is rather smooth :] How much it fits the cat: Crowstorm is extremely good as a prefix, as it describes the cat's fur. Storm creates an image, and I don't know how he'll be in the future, but who knows :]
Morningcloud Sensibility: Morning is a good prefix, so is cloud. Image: A black or mainly black cat. Short or long fur. Maybe a few scars, due to his ferocity. Warrior-ness: Acceptable!! Smoothness: It is rather smooth :] How much it fits the cat: Crowstorm is extremely good as a prefix, as it describes the cat's fur. Storm creates an image, and I don't know how he'll be in the future, but who knows :]
Gladefeet Hollythorn Hidefeather (currently Hidepaw (Hide comes from the animal hide)) Dustfeather (currently Dustpaw) Mudstripe Berrypool (Currently Berry) Ruffledpelt (currently Ruffledpaw)
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Post by Shadewing on Oct 27, 2009 16:12:03 GMT -5
GLADEFEET
Sensibility: Cats know what glades and, and certainly know what feet are. Image: Brownish black, due to the color of tree trunks. Warrior-ness: Yep! Smoothness: It sounds smooth. How much it fits the cat: Fits well enough :]
HOLLYTHORN
Sensibility: Cats know what holly is, and thorns. Plus, there are thorns on holly leaves, and she has a kinda prickly personality iirc. cha-ching. Image: She's likely a reddish cat as the red color of holly berries. Warrior-ness: Yeah. Smoothness: It's worthwhile. How much it fits the cat: Very well.
HIDEFEATHER
Sensibility: Cats know what hides and feathers are. Together they don't work too well, though. Like.. deer hide, and feather? ehh. Image: idk. Brown? Soft fur? Nice cat? Warrior-ness: Ehhh not my favorite. Smoothness: Again, not the best, but still ok. How much it fits the cat: I don't think that this is the /best/ name to describe her.
DUSTFEATHER
Sensibility: Cats know what dust is, and feathers. And the image of a dusty feather <3 Image: I don't know.. sandy color, maybe? |D Warrior-ness: Acceptable~ Smoothness: Good. How much it fits the cat: Close enough.
MUDSTRIPE
Sensibility: Alright, not the most graceful name, but it makes perfect sense. Mud, stripe. Both known. Image: Dark brown with darker brown stripes. Warrior-ness: Yes :] Smoothness: fine. How much it fits the cat: Fits perfectly, I think :]
BERRYPOOL
Sensibility: Cats know what berries are. And pools of water. Image: Some berry color [white, brown, black, reddish]. And pool points out eyes, so maybe berry colored eyes. Warrior-ness: Works. Pool isn't my favorite suffix but ehhh Smoothness: Works. How much it fits the cat: Fits well.
RUFFLEDPELT
Sensibility: Ruffled fur, and pelt. Simple and works. Image: Don't know about color, but we know his pelt is ruffled, and likely is a spinxish cat or some sort of variation. Warrior-ness: Yep. Smoothness: Not perfect, but still good. How much it fits the cat: well.
all caught up.
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Post by Twilight on Oct 28, 2009 6:41:04 GMT -5
Okay, I have more!! I'm reposting Flamepaw's since I decided against all the ones I thought of before. XD
Flameshade Lionessdawn (Currently Lioness)
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Post by Shadewing on Oct 28, 2009 13:32:27 GMT -5
FLAMESHADE
Sensibility: Cats know what flame and shade are. Image: An orangy cat with a darker personality. Warrior-ness: Flame's iffy, as flames are a disaster that generally aren't a good thing. Shade's okay, though. Smoothness: Yeah, it's ok. How much it fits the cat: Good. Traditionalness: Flame and shade are both bad prefixes for traditionalism, but they still work.
LIONESSDAWN
Sensibility: Cats know what lionesses are, and dawns. Image: Tanish she-cat with a bright personality? Warrior-ness: yeah, it works. Smoothness: no offense but this is so clunky sfgadgdgswd /sadface How much it fits the cat: don't know about the personality, BECAUSE SHE DOESN'T HAVE A FORM IIRC >> Traditionalness: Lioness, i just hate the prefix for some reason. It's too many syllables. warrior cats are rather simple and to the point, so i guess she's be another lion to them, not a lioness. though, not positive about that.
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Dewdrop
Apprentice
SILKTAIL WAS HERE MARKING HER TERRITORY. ly Mizz :>[M:0]
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Post by Dewdrop on Oct 29, 2009 16:55:27 GMT -5
please do Dewdrop :3
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